SupraAddict's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Street Smarts]

This looks a little odd.

I'm not too sure about the artistic qualities of this artwork, but I can give you a +1 for the attempt on a toyota Supra-like vehicle on the left. As for room for improvement, the bevel tool is not your friend. When you used it, it took a lot of detail out of the vehicles. That, and the shadows are a little off. The direction of the light looks wrong, and the light looks too bright. This is a scene at night, so the shadows should be a little less defined, and the light on the vehicles should be a little more defined.

Other than that, it was a pretty good attempt.

[Weapons Armory]

I like the look of them

These weapons look as if they were designed for a flash game. I especially like the M4, the AK variants, and the Barrett (M99?). The color that you've added into them just make them perfect for use in a flash game. Room for improvement would be a bigger mag on the FA-MAS, a little darker G36C (I've never seen one so light, so you could custom-camo it) and the desert eagle looks a bit off, namely the slide.

Other than that, I realize that you had to shrink some guns to make them all fit on this sheet, but the SVD looks as if it's not finished yet. Great work, and with all of these, you should start putting yourself out there in terms of flash games, someone is bound to notice.

[The Bottle Shot Attendant]

Ah it's all there.

I remember my time as a Bottle Shop Attendant, and it was strikingly similar to this, especially the wrinkled clothes, vacant stare and shoes. However I never had a scanner or a customer assault me (I do know of a person that did get hit a couple times though). All in all, a great image, and the only thing I'd recommend if you would further develop this is to add the store background, all dimly lit and such.

[Newgrounds]

It's Excellent

The Grayscale artistic approach was definitely the best choice for what you've created. Your art style is modern and proportions are great. The only real part that irks me is the barrel over the W, it seems a bit off. Other then that, nice work.

[Xombie]

It has that cartoon feeling

The way you portrayed him with teeth standing up and a wave make your work have that friendly feeling. The colors are pretty basic, with some simple shading and highlights. The background is barren with a few curly trees(?)
I can tell that the mood for this is dark humor, because something, just doesn't seem right about it...
To improve, I would suggest you made his bandolier belt a bit more standing out with shading. Other then that, Nice work, it looks great.

ShortMonkey responds:

Thanks for the review!

"I can tell that the mood for this is dark humor, because something, just doesn't seem right about it..."

Actually, humour is unintentional. However, what makes it feel a bit 'not right' is the pupils in the eyes.

[Subaru Impreza STI]

It's Excellent, truly excellent

I love the way you've added shading and light using acrylic paints, especially on the Headlight of the STi. The blending below the front fender looks spectacular, and altogether gives this work a great sense of power. The mistakes on the rim shape, and on the headlight, are only noticeable if you are looking for them, so don't be hard on your self.

10/10
Also, when you run out of ideas, there's always the "make a Supra Close-up with acrylic paints" one :)
Great work

z28ump responds:

ThanksSupraAddict. I know it's not too obvious to others, but every time I see it I'm thinking, "Why I didn't see the mistake before painting"...

And I'll be sure to put that Supra on my to do list. :)
May be a while before I get to it with school starting up though... :(

[NG VaultBoy: Level 3]

Great picture, but

I couldn't help but notice that your shadowing is scattered. There are different points of light that don't make very much sense.

[Fluorescence]

Not Bad

I love the colors you've added into the universe. Instead of having it the typical black with white stars, you went for a more fundamental approach. Great work positioning-wise as well.

[Deagles]

Great work drawing the Deagle, son.

I don't know why, but last time I tried to draw one of those bastards I just couldn't do it. Your style is excellent; everything is in proportion, and the radial/linear tool was used to the best of its abilities.

fallensoul289 responds:

Thank you for the review. This is one of my better peices of art. It took me some time to do this and the radial tool was used prefectly.

[1965 Mustang]

Not bad

The simplicity of it is what makes it so outstanding, although on the rims and bumpers, you should replace the radial tool with something else...

Also, for a sleeker look, highlight most of the lines and instead of having them black, make them a shade of orange so that they blend in with the car more.

Overall not bad, but add a background!

fallensoul289 responds:

Yes I agree I will add a backround and prehaps make the rims alot better.