SupraAddict's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Lost in Space796]

Pretty good for your first

I couldn't help but notice some lack of physics though.
I get it that they are in space, so why is there gravity for bombs?
not to mention there couldn't be a complete stop without a consistint force equal to the propulsion of the rocket when it enters the 'unknown zone'
I hope I helped :)

Lostinspace796 responds:

lol ya thats the problem i keep playing over and over but i just desiced 2 leave things as tehy were and post it

[Loss...]

Nice job.

The music gave it a feel of atmosphere.
My only suggestion is to animate it even more so it doesn't look like a picture book with sub-titles, so to speak.
The art was pretty good, especially for your first flash.
Great job
8/10
Decent Score!

SkaterBB responds:

Thanks =]

[Midnight Fireworks]

Great job on your work

I see the improvement, along with one of my favorite songs :3
If you want to take it to another level, you could blur the moon a little, and give parts of the building a red or blue shade, depending on which kind of fireworks appear.
But, all in all, great job,and I'm glad I helped :)

8/10

Killafan777 responds:

Thanks, I'm thinking about adding more stuff such as the preloader, more fireworks with different effects, maybe make the moon look more relistic with texturing, etc.

It's going to be sparkling by the time im done. I hope :P

[Test Run, First Flash]

pretty good!

great job with your voice acting and style-but, in the future, don't state that it is your first flash-some newgroundsers take that as a bad aspect and hit the "blam button" so to speak. which will definitely diminish your deserved score unfairly-happened to me a while back. but great job, you definitely have potential.

My suggestion to improve is to add some actionscript, like make a square, or whatever, and selct it, press "F8" and make it into a button.
then put in the code

on(release)
{
gotoAndStop(1);
}

this will make a re-play button at the end of your flash-essential really.
and you might want to stop your flash instead of having it loop- use this on your last frame

stop();

hope I helped

RyuJinLucy responds:

Ah, thank you. I was wondering how to fix that.

[¡LIC van a McDonald!]

>:)

the animation was pretty good, although if you add some translations, or even sub-titles, it might help you out.

Not bad. Is this for a project?

1st responds:

Sí. Ésta es mi tesis mayor en los efectos de los restaurantes de McDonald en la comunidad de Latino. ¡Gracias por mirar!

[.<3]

Speechless

This was incredible!
you are a truly talented animator hands down.

Quick question-have you taken any flash tutorials or learned by yourself?

skarl3tte responds:

I've taught myself. I'm not really good with doing the tutorial thing. It always turns out wrong or something.

[JulianRocks' birthday]

hm.

pros
the animation was ok

you Like to celebrate people's birthdays :)

cons
the voice from speakonia(it just isn't top notch-try a different style from the original clock crew)

no music(it seemed to drab without a good track in the background)

other than that, it was ok.

2/10
Try out some tutorials to better help you with flash.

IZSBHR responds:

I think the animation should matter above all else. This EASILY deserved a two and a half!

[Family Guy SUCKS!!]

Everyone has de rite to express their own opinions

within their flash. I don't judge a flash by which crew made it, or by it's expression on a certain topic. Although, This flash is Titled '!!Family Guy SUCKS!!', I
didn't see why you used characters from family guy to express this. If you think about it, it is quite ironic. But, like I said, I don't judge by old biases or opinions, just about content.
The way you used a drab over tone was brilliant as it builded up to the applause.
although I would say the final message is annoying at the end of the flash.
I would improve on animating the characters so they move instead of just pics of them, and I would add a 'replay' button at the end so the Newgrounds users know it has ended. other than that, it was ok.

4/10
NOT BAD!
(+)MADNESS(+)

Heil responds:

hahahaha

[Machina Humana]

It is a very confusing story-line

The animation was far advanced and front-page worthy, yet, How everything links up is still bewildering me. Perhaps you could tell me Wtf is going on, lol =)

anyways, teh review
pros of your hard work-
*Kick ass animation
*Compelling visuals
*either FBF or tweening, It still looks realistic movement wise
*your selected colors created an Atmospheric aura around your flash
*3D style flawlessly pulled off
*good music choice
*all-round great flash
The parts to improve on your hard work
*storyline-basically, for people who don't really know what is happening,
just put a button at the end to goto a frame that sums up the story line
*translator-for those who do not speak....whatever that laguage was(spanish?)
maybe add a menu with a sub title toggle.
*replay button-you caught your honest mistake, 'nuf sed

overall 9/10
INSANE SCORE!
(+)MADNESS(+)

MrGUS responds:

Thanks alot for your review, it's really helpful, and I am now realizing, by this review and others, that elements such as the translation and maybe a bit of more input on the story are more important to point out than I though. I just enjoy a bit an aura of mystery around something... but on the other hand, I do like at least having a clue about it and wonder around the details... so I'll do just that.

Thanks,
Gustavo M.

[The Madness Code 2]

9.1mb!? *jaw Drops*

It is a little choppy, probably regarding the fps of the movie which leads me to believe you did this fbf, am I right?
anyways, aside from being a little choppy the storyline was ok, and so was the music 6/10.

DP responds:

Thanks. FBF yes.