You had a good idea
Pros
Originality
custom icon
cons
Not much flash work
Insufficient storyline
My suggestion is to improve on your flash making skills, and storyline.
You have good ideas, kid, but the effort isn't there
You had a good idea
Pros
Originality
custom icon
cons
Not much flash work
Insufficient storyline
My suggestion is to improve on your flash making skills, and storyline.
You have good ideas, kid, but the effort isn't there
It was ok
The graphics were likable, but the voice was a lil hoarse. Srry.
The review~~~~
pros on your hard work-
short file-a good size kb is always good :)
'eye pleasing' graphics-they matched up well with the flash
custom pre-loader-it shows you worked hard on this flash
cons of your hard work-
the voice-We know you can't help it so I wont deduct much
The storyline-It was not to be expected but could have been better.
overall
5/10
DECENT SCORE!
love'd it
It looks like you worked hard on it, so....
PERFECT SCORE 10/10
Everyone has de rite to express their own opinions
within their flash. I don't judge a flash by which crew made it, or by it's expression on a certain topic. Although, This flash is Titled '!!Family Guy SUCKS!!', I
didn't see why you used characters from family guy to express this. If you think about it, it is quite ironic. But, like I said, I don't judge by old biases or opinions, just about content.
The way you used a drab over tone was brilliant as it builded up to the applause.
although I would say the final message is annoying at the end of the flash.
I would improve on animating the characters so they move instead of just pics of them, and I would add a 'replay' button at the end so the Newgrounds users know it has ended. other than that, it was ok.
4/10
NOT BAD!
(+)MADNESS(+)
hahahaha
not as funny as the emo 1, but
still was creative, good job.
I like how you keep the animation simple, yet amusing to watch.
I can see, even in a short like this, that you put a lot of work into this.
I hope to see more Johnny animations from you, and maybe even your own collection of them.
"addicted"
It was a good, short vid of my favorite ride tearing it up there, yea!
I can't say "no" to a Supra movie :P
it could use a preloader though
9.1mb!? *jaw Drops*
It is a little choppy, probably regarding the fps of the movie which leads me to believe you did this fbf, am I right?
anyways, aside from being a little choppy the storyline was ok, and so was the music 6/10.
Thanks. FBF yes.
Joined on 3/18/07