SupraAddict's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[TANKWOMEN]

You had a good idea

Pros
Originality
custom icon

cons
Not much flash work
Insufficient storyline

My suggestion is to improve on your flash making skills, and storyline.

You have good ideas, kid, but the effort isn't there

[SuperFist]

It was ok

The graphics were likable, but the voice was a lil hoarse. Srry.

The review~~~~

pros on your hard work-
short file-a good size kb is always good :)
'eye pleasing' graphics-they matched up well with the flash
custom pre-loader-it shows you worked hard on this flash

cons of your hard work-
the voice-We know you can't help it so I wont deduct much
The storyline-It was not to be expected but could have been better.

overall

5/10
DECENT SCORE!

[Happiness Apotheosis]

love'd it

It looks like you worked hard on it, so....
PERFECT SCORE 10/10

[Family Guy SUCKS!!]

Everyone has de rite to express their own opinions

within their flash. I don't judge a flash by which crew made it, or by it's expression on a certain topic. Although, This flash is Titled '!!Family Guy SUCKS!!', I
didn't see why you used characters from family guy to express this. If you think about it, it is quite ironic. But, like I said, I don't judge by old biases or opinions, just about content.
The way you used a drab over tone was brilliant as it builded up to the applause.
although I would say the final message is annoying at the end of the flash.
I would improve on animating the characters so they move instead of just pics of them, and I would add a 'replay' button at the end so the Newgrounds users know it has ended. other than that, it was ok.

4/10
NOT BAD!
(+)MADNESS(+)

Heil responds:

hahahaha

[Machina Humana]

It is a very confusing story-line

The animation was far advanced and front-page worthy, yet, How everything links up is still bewildering me. Perhaps you could tell me Wtf is going on, lol =)

anyways, teh review
pros of your hard work-
*Kick ass animation
*Compelling visuals
*either FBF or tweening, It still looks realistic movement wise
*your selected colors created an Atmospheric aura around your flash
*3D style flawlessly pulled off
*good music choice
*all-round great flash
The parts to improve on your hard work
*storyline-basically, for people who don't really know what is happening,
just put a button at the end to goto a frame that sums up the story line
*translator-for those who do not speak....whatever that laguage was(spanish?)
maybe add a menu with a sub title toggle.
*replay button-you caught your honest mistake, 'nuf sed

overall 9/10
INSANE SCORE!
(+)MADNESS(+)

MrGUS responds:

Thanks alot for your review, it's really helpful, and I am now realizing, by this review and others, that elements such as the translation and maybe a bit of more input on the story are more important to point out than I though. I just enjoy a bit an aura of mystery around something... but on the other hand, I do like at least having a clue about it and wonder around the details... so I'll do just that.

Thanks,
Gustavo M.

[[STAIN]]

It ok

This flash movie is an original and unique theme.
I didn't understand it at all though. What was this all about?
anyways, congrats

[Johnny meets an alien]

not as funny as the emo 1, but

still was creative, good job.
I like how you keep the animation simple, yet amusing to watch.
I can see, even in a short like this, that you put a lot of work into this.
I hope to see more Johnny animations from you, and maybe even your own collection of them.

[Background Tutorial - RHA]

it was ok

It didn't go in depthof different designs. like a house, but Its hard to create all of that for one tut.
Good job 9/10

[Supra Drift.]

"addicted"

It was a good, short vid of my favorite ride tearing it up there, yea!
I can't say "no" to a Supra movie :P
it could use a preloader though

[The Madness Code 2]

9.1mb!? *jaw Drops*

It is a little choppy, probably regarding the fps of the movie which leads me to believe you did this fbf, am I right?
anyways, aside from being a little choppy the storyline was ok, and so was the music 6/10.

DP responds:

Thanks. FBF yes.