SupraAddict's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Advanced car systems]

lol, made me laugh

Well, it looks like it was made Frame by frame, but
it still looked terrific!

I'm a little surprised on how you chose that car
specifically, which I'm guessing is your favorite
vehicle, Am I right? :3

Not bad for being the fastest car in the world, and a
great advanced car system, now if only my favorite
car had something like that ;-)

I'm going to try a more retro review type, so bear
with me, ok? :P

Originality-Well, I can't say the flash movie is
totally original, due to the transformer, but,
the way you added the twist on the car thief
was, so I'd give it a 7.5

Audio-It didn't have an actual track, but you
did add some nice sound effects to your
flash movie to make it more interactive with
the user. That earns you an 8 :P

Storyline-While not as deep as Prowlies at
the river, it still has some basis and is not
entirely random, so, you guessed it, a 6.5

Humor-This is where you really rack in some
points here. it was pure comedy and the deliverance
was excellent, so it's a 9.5

Theme-it had a moral to the story, while not as
touching and moving as many, I guess a guy
getting shot out of a cannon of a car's system
counts... 7

Overall, 8
Great Flash!

kojay responds:

yeh i wanted to avoid death

thnks for the detailed review this will help with my fmp

[Mario vs. Bowser (new)]

It's not too too bad :P

Well, Like I stated above,
it isn't too too bad, especially
for your first flash.

First of all, I want to point
out that I am impressed with
your animation.

Most people start out with
stick figures that are pretty
terrible.

not only are your mario
animations visually appealing, but
your animation skill isn't too bad
either.

The starting frame I was very impressed
with, it was smooth running-not choppy
like the other people's flash games
I've reviewed.

The game itself though is too short and
lacking a storyline. Also, you could add
an extra effect and put in some "nintendo
64" music hot off the audio portal for the
opening title.

The battle phase should probably have some
fast paced music. That way, the newgrounds
viewers can get a better feel and connection
for the game resulting in-you guessed it,
a higher score.

Perhaps even, the game could have a storyline
in it instead of just "battling Bowser".

For instance, you could have an Rpg where the final boss
is him and the code for the actionscript can be located on
some of the newgrounds tutorials.

Overall I would say it is a short fun game
to play.

5/10
Mediocre score

[Bob, those are not yours!]

Lol, you died!

I like it. It has just about everything I look for in a
flash game-a decent Storyline, pretty smooth animation,
good animation, good selection of audio, and, of course,
a funny ending.

That flash is pretty prominent , especially the simplicity
of everything. The graphics are as detailed only to enough
that you can tell the storyline.

There are, a couple things I think you need to work on though,
sorry to say, the walking sequence with Bob, seemed a little
inflexible. his back didn't look like it was a part of him, only the
arms and legs were moving giving it an unnatural look.

You can find a couple of tutorials on walking examples
here on newgrounds. They help you out, and if you don't get
it right, then you can get the downloadable version on one of them.

On another note, the scene where Bob was reaching slowly for the
cookie and promptly cuts to the scene where he's hanging with
the "lol, you died" song. Brilliant comedy, just brilliant.

The only problem with the last scene is the lack of color accents
in the final frame. No offense, but it kind of looks like you rushed it a
little bit to get on newgrounds faster.

Also, I can't stress this enough, you need to find a new character
concept. When newgrounders see a plain stick figure, they instantly-
almost instinctively vote lower because they have seen stick figures
over and over again.
Try to invent a totally new character and you'll find
you will get a higher score.

Well, I have to say, it was a good flash and I'm glad I viewed it :)

Overall, I think you deserve higher score than you received.
7/10
great score

Kilerden responds:

Thx,

I'll try to make a character next time, but the picture was about a stickmen, so i wanted that the same.

thx, for your good review.

Gr, Kilerden

[Cog of Man]

Very abstract, yet deep

Many clock flashes you can tell have no story, no purpose, and took 5 minutes to make.
Many of these flashes are made by other people who claim to be in the clock crew but are not. You, my friend, have made a piece of art.
This is a highly detailed flash with a deep impacting story and theme.

The way you made the flash movie was creative. The fade ins/fade outs gave it that noir look.
It was great, hands down, great.

You changed my outlook on clock movies, and for that I'll give you a 10/10 and put this as my favorite.

overall
10/10
INSANE SCORE!

PropagandaClock responds:

I am glad I have been able to open your eyes to the light of which is Clock,
yet I am a mere prophet whom works in HIS honour.

Thank you for all the kind words, it makes the hard hours worth it!
Remember;
The ClockCrew always loves... you just have to love back!

I'd highly recommend "Short Flash about Bill M." by ZombieLincon, he is a great Clock and his flashes inspired me to do this one!

[GCO!: Parte Uno]

Not bad for a Sprite Movie.

I'm sorry to say this, but sprite movies aren't necessarily my favorite kind of flash movies. But I was pleasantly surprised at this movie.

It has an easy to follow story with a great start and sprite movement.
I can really tell that you worked extra hard on this flash which is why I commend you for it.

You are one of the few people who can make a sprite movie so entertaining and fun to watch as well as to vote on. I can see this winning an award.

overall
7/10
good Score

Rule responds:

Wow, thanks very much. Y'know, this is my first sprite movie ever made. Thanks a bunch for your review.

[Minushi - Chapter 19]

A lil bit too easy, but good nonetheless :P

I have to say it was pretty entertaining. Though, you might want to go back and make it longer.

Hope I helped

[Kraft Commercial]

Short, simple, and clever

Great job with this. I can see why it won the contest ;-)

LiLg responds:

Thanks!

[C or B? Remastered]

Great job

I notice you used Liveswif. I'm sorry I never made the tutorial to help people out.
But it's not bad for your first flash.

joza1 responds:

You should make the tutorial, you're realy good at Liveswif. Thanxies!

[Mastermind 3]

Love it

Your animation was so realistic as to wonder how you did this so brilliantly. Nice flash!